Thursday 17th August 2023
Hemi had been discovered as the creator of the robot. The robot had gone rogue and tried to kill the people of his town.
The crowd came yelling and decided to scream at the boy Hemi.
The children started running while the robot created wildfires and destruction of the small buildings. Hemi thought to himself and started to create another machinery to defeat his
Previous creation.
With his head covered by a helmet he grinded up a microwave, old tv, parts of his bike,
And a laptop.
He named it the ¨Lawnmower Destroyer¨.
The robot used it´s sharp edges from the old TV to slice right through the mower’s center. The people praised Hemi for saving them. And they lived
Happily Ever After . . .
Kia Ora Alilia,
my name is Eden and wow your writing was amazing! I loved all of the descriptive words you used and the creativity with the different types of robots. One thing I would love to see is a little more back story about the robot who destroyed the town. Maybe you could add how Hemi created the robot and why it went rouge? Other than that your work was brilliant, keep up the good mahi.